First introduction email
Send this first, to the head coach and every assistant listed on the school's card.
Subject: [GRAD YEAR] [POSITION] | Ravenswood HS | Interested in [SCHOOL] Basketball
Dear Coach [LAST NAME],
My name is [YOUR NAME] and I am a [HEIGHT] [POSITION] in the class of [GRAD YEAR] at Ravenswood High School.
I am reaching out because I am very interested in [SCHOOL] and would love to learn more about you and your program. What steps should I take to begin the recruiting process with your program?
Quick profile:
- GPA: [GPA] / Test scores: [SCORES if you have them]
- Season averages: [PTS] pts, [REB] reb, [AST] ast, [STL] stl
- Highlight film: [LINK]
- Full game film: [LINK]
- Club/AAU: [PROGRAM], coach [NAME], [PHONE]
- High school coach: [NAME], [PHONE], [EMAIL]
I filled out your recruiting questionnaire today. Could you tell me what you look for at my position and whether you have camps or open gyms I could attend?
Thank you for your time and consideration.
Best regards,
[YOUR NAME]
[PHONE] | [EMAIL]
Follow-up (no reply after 10-14 days)
One polite follow-up. If there is still no reply, move on and check back after your next season update.
Subject: Following up — [YOUR NAME], [GRAD YEAR] [POSITION], Ravenswood HS
Coach [LAST NAME],
I emailed a couple weeks ago and wanted to follow up in case my note got buried.
Since then: [NEW STAT LINE, AWARD, TEST SCORE, OR NEW FILM].
Updated film: [LINK]
I am still very interested in [SCHOOL] and would appreciate any feedback on where I stand or what you would like to see from me.
Thank you,
[YOUR NAME]
[PHONE] | [EMAIL]
Season / film update
Send after a big game, a new highlight reel, a new GPA or a new test score.
Subject: Season update + new film — [YOUR NAME], [GRAD YEAR], Ravenswood HS
Coach [LAST NAME],
Quick update from my season at Ravenswood:
- Record: [TEAM RECORD]
- My averages: [PTS] pts, [REB] reb, [AST] ast on [FG%] FG / [3P%] from three
- Recent game: [BEST GAME LINE] vs [OPPONENT]
- New GPA: [GPA]
New film: [LINK]
Our remaining schedule is below in case you or a staff member can get out to a game:
[DATE — OPPONENT — TIME — LOCATION]
[DATE — OPPONENT — TIME — LOCATION]
Thank you,
[YOUR NAME]
[PHONE] | [EMAIL]
Unofficial visit request
Use once a coach has replied or invited you to reach out.
Subject: Unofficial visit request — [YOUR NAME], [GRAD YEAR]
Coach [LAST NAME],
Thank you for the reply. [SCHOOL] is [DRIVE TIME] from Ravenswood, so my family can drive up on a school break or a weekend.
Would [DATE OPTION 1] or [DATE OPTION 2] work for an unofficial visit? I would like to see a practice if possible, tour campus, and hear about [ACADEMIC PROGRAM].
We can also sit in on an admissions session the same day if that is easier for your staff.
Thank you,
[YOUR NAME]
[PHONE] | [EMAIL]
Camp or open-gym question
Great low-pressure first contact for schools inside easy driving distance.
Subject: Camp / open gym dates — [YOUR NAME], [GRAD YEAR] [POSITION]
Coach [LAST NAME],
I am a [GRAD YEAR] [POSITION] at Ravenswood High School and I would like to work out in front of your staff.
Do you have elite camps, team camps, or prospect open gyms scheduled? If you send the dates and registration link I will get signed up.
Film: [LINK]
Thank you,
[YOUR NAME]
[PHONE] | [EMAIL]
Thank-you after a visit or call
Send within 24 hours of any call, visit or camp.
Subject: Thank you — [YOUR NAME], [DATE] visit
Coach [LAST NAME],
Thank you for the time yesterday. [ONE SPECIFIC THING YOU LIKED — practice intensity, the academic building, how the guards were coached] stood out to me.
I am [HONEST INTEREST LEVEL: very interested / keeping [SCHOOL] high on my list], and my next steps are [SUMMER SCHEDULE / TEST DATE / APPLICATION].
Please let me know what you need from me next.
Thank you,
[YOUR NAME]
[PHONE] | [EMAIL]
Phone / voicemail script
Read it out loud twice before you dial. Keep it under 45 seconds.
"Coach [LAST NAME], this is [YOUR NAME], a [GRAD YEAR] [POSITION] at Ravenswood High School in West Virginia — about [DRIVE TIME] from campus.
I emailed you my film on [DATE] and filled out your questionnaire. I'm [HEIGHT], I average [PTS] points and [REB] rebounds, and I carry a [GPA] GPA.
I'm calling to ask two things: what you look for at my position, and whether you have camps or open gyms this summer.
My number is [PHONE] and my email is [EMAIL]. Thank you for your time, Coach."
Parent / guardian email
Coaches want to hear from the player first. Parents follow up on logistics, cost and academics.
Subject: [PLAYER NAME] ([GRAD YEAR]) — family follow-up
Coach [LAST NAME],
I am [PARENT NAME], [PLAYER NAME]'s [RELATION]. [HE/SHE/THEY] reached out on [DATE] about your program.
We are local — Ravenswood, WV, roughly [DRIVE TIME] away — so visiting campus is realistic for us.
Two questions from the family side:
1. What does a typical financial-aid or scholarship package look like for a student-athlete at [SCHOOL]?
2. What academic support does the athletic department provide during season?
Thank you for your time,
[PARENT NAME]
[PHONE] | [EMAIL]